"Lunch time" my mum shouted!! at us from the benches, of we went running to the table to get their lunch first because I was slow I hardly had any lunch for my self at the end of the day when I saw these cool pair of glasses we kept them because someone left them in my bags with my togs.
when the time came to a end we were all sad because we had to go home and get ready to go over to my aunties house for a BBQ.
sub Joseph I like the way you put in discriping words in you story but next time put in punctuation s in you story.
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