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Friday, June 24, 2011

Poem about(Nsw)


Last night was the state of origins New south wales against the
six year champions yes I said hoping that
New south wales would win but as we got near the end yes yes yes then Luke Lewis
came charging for the first try because Jamie Soward Bombed up the ball. YES!!! I yelled
happily I was relieved that we were in the lead
EXCITED,and ENJOYING but some-times furious for when they did something wrong OH!!! my papa would say in a scary voice then suddenly my papa changed his voice when Queens land just got a try ooh man I said in a sad voice thinking we were going to lose
but I had faith until I saw with my dark brown eyes one of us scored another TRY!!!
yes I said ones again then we won 18,to 8 to us my heart was raising because we did
very good against Queensland by a little bit.

My best independent Writing(T2W7)

Wow! I said loud because on Sunday was my cousins seventh birthday, just when we were about to go I heard that we were going to the movies than I said in one day that when she said yes I was excited to hear all the great news we were doing on the weekends. on Saturday was the big rugby game we all had faith that we were going to beat them but when they just got the ball they were all very good at trying to get past us and but when they got the try they won against us because they were all tall and very good. after my rugby game we quickly rushed of and get to my little cousins birthday in time so we can start the BBQ and start eating because every one was so hungry they said they could eat a horse so we went home had a shower because we were soaking wet from all the rain dripping on us all day. when we got there we said HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! so all of us started to eating and most of them were even eating like animals eating in cages then when all of us were full we all went home and had a little sleep.