My best independent Writing(T2W7)

Wow! I said loud because on Sunday was my cousins seventh birthday, just when we were about to go I heard that we were going to the movies than I said in one day that when she said yes I was excited to hear all the great news we were doing on the weekends. on Saturday was the big rugby game we all had faith that we were going to beat them but when they just got the ball they were all very good at trying to get past us and but when they got the try they won against us because they were all tall and very good. after my rugby game we quickly rushed of and get to my little cousins birthday in time so we can start the BBQ and start eating because every one was so hungry they said they could eat a horse so we went home had a shower because we were soaking wet from all the rain dripping on us all day. when we got there we said HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! so all of us started to eating and most of them were even eating like animals eating in cages then when all of us were full we all went home and had a little sleep.