Friday, June 24, 2011
Poem about(Nsw)
Last night was the state of origins New south wales against the
six year champions yes I said hoping that
New south wales would win but as we got near the end yes yes yes then Luke Lewis
came charging for the first try because Jamie Soward Bombed up the ball. YES!!! I yelled
happily I was relieved that we were in the lead
EXCITED,and ENJOYING but some-times furious for when they did something wrong OH!!! my papa would say in a scary voice then suddenly my papa changed his voice when Queens land just got a try ooh man I said in a sad voice thinking we were going to lose
but I had faith until I saw with my dark brown eyes one of us scored another TRY!!!
yes I said ones again then we won 18,to 8 to us my heart was raising because we did
very good against Queensland by a little bit.
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